I really like your comic strip! It’s very funny and well written, telling a convincing story. I particularly like the end caption which matches the image and facial expressions perfectly! Ka pai! I also like that you changed the background colour to orange to make it stand out. Orange is also my favourite colour, what’s yours?
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Maybe you could increase the size of your text so it’s a bit easier to read for your readers. Or you could turn the longer captions into two speech bubbles.
Kia ora Alamoni,
ReplyDeleteI really like your comic strip! It’s very funny and well written, telling a convincing story. I particularly like the end caption which matches the image and facial expressions perfectly! Ka pai! I also like that you changed the background colour to orange to make it stand out. Orange is also my favourite colour, what’s yours?
Because you’ve written such a great comic strip, I was wondering, if you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships.
Maybe you could increase the size of your text so it’s a bit easier to read for your readers. Or you could turn the longer captions into two speech bubbles.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)