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Friday 18 May 2018

Maui the god of all power


I will be telling you a story long ago when Maui was training to be a

God.


Long ago when Maui was training to be a god he had won his 5th challenge and every time he had won a challenge he would get a tattoo,the tattoos meant something,strength,speed,trust, accuracy,and scenes too.


One day Maui thought he would take a break from training to be a god and go visit the mortal world,he had forgotten what a bed felt like so he went off to find one,till then it was night time but just in time he found a little hut with a wooden bed and guess what he did... he went to sleep in the bed.

The next morning Maui got out of bed but it looked like his tattoos woke up first because when he woke up his tattoos were gone.

He wonder of looking for his tattoos but instead he found a  mysterious cave darker than dark colder than cold so he went in, once he step foot into the cave the opening broke into a million pieces and everything turn red because a witch with power beyond the universe was their,she said " I’ll give you back what you want if you get me a star a star far far from this place" so he accepted it but what he did not know was that the star was a legendary hook made from the gods that he was training with.

He found the star and grabbed with all his might,at last he got  it but the star turned into a hook,when he got to the witch he had already got used to it, but instead of giving it  to the witch he kill the witch instead but he did not get his tattoos.

Lastly he went to the gods and they gave him all his tattoos and one last tattoo, a tattoo only gods had...and from that day he became a god..a god with a legendary hook and good looks but most of all his name is Maui the god of all power.

5 comments:

  1. Wow! Alamoni your narrative was great to read!

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  2. Malo Le lei Alamoni, nice and creative story, reminds me of the story about Meariki. My medal is going to you because of all the creativeness and very Year 7 and 8 words. My mission for you is to change up a few words because some don't make sense but other than that it is very good! :)

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  3. Talofa Lava Alamoni, I absolutely love your narrative you should publish it to TOI TOI. That would be amazing! Keep up the good work!

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  4. Hello Alamoni. I enjoyed reading your awesome narrative writing. My favourite part in the story was when Maui got his god tattoo. Great job!

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  5. Hello Alamoni. That was a really good narrative.

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